So pretty
It surrounds her
Swallows her up
and takes her to a better world
With no fighting
and no yelling
A world with no pain
Happiness all around
The kind that makes you smile
just looking at it
The kind that is too good to be true
It's not real
The kind that only exists in dreams
The kind that will dissapear when you open your eyes
And when it dissapears
All the fighting
and yelling
and all the pain
will bring her back to reality
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Happiness all around
The kind that makes you smile
I like the idea of this poem. What color would happiness be? What else would it make you do besides smile?
Try likening the happiness to something else (simile or metaphor).
Nice 1 Dear...., but remember, it is with that real world that you have to put up. But just consider to yourself to be a poet that you are and churn out poetry from every dark situations. Remember - our sweetest poems are about our saddest thoughts.... well done and keep it up.
Nothing is forever. Happiness can be found in many places though, some of us just don't feel we deserve it. Perhaps we run from happiness ourselves Brookey.
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